it was dark and cold and deep..
my eyes begging me to sleep..
i stood as a candle melting on both sides..
glancing at the glittering silver tides..
waiting for i do not know what..
standing there leaving my body to rot..
no more is the pain no more is the pain..
no more my work will be in vain..
Alas I got a friend to share..
my ideas my thoughts my love and care..
may our friendship forever be there..
may our friendship forever be there..
Thank you my friend.. I have started blogging!!!
Good Attempt! Read more poems, read more books, that way, vocabulary increases and you can get more words to describe you feelings!
ReplyDeleteLol.. Reading is the last thing that I do..
ReplyDeleteBut since u asked me to Ill start right away..